Wednesday, 6 August 2014

Love at First Flight - (Part 1) Broken English

A foreign teacher arrives in China and falls in love with a local, but the path of true love is anything but smooth.
 

 




Love at First Flight

 
(Part 1 of 5)  Broken English

 
by Matthew Griffiths
 





‘Chinese culture seems designed to make relationships as complicated as possible.’ Malcolm put the book on his lap and smiled. Forewarned is forearmed right?


A measured voice interrupted his thoughts. “Rice or noodles?”
He looked up at the flight attendant’s face and blushed.
He’d had some interesting moments already communicating with the university from a distance. The author of the book was an American journalist who studied and worked in China for years. A good introduction for a foreigner arriving to start his first English teaching job. The book had lots of other helpful insights as well.
Her voice came again, with practised patience. “Rice with pork or beef noodle?
            He coughed. “Ahh, rice please.”
            She was tall and slim, and wore the dark blue skirt and white patterned blouse of the flight crew. Her red scarf was perfectly arranged at her throat. In her ears small diamond earrings sparkled. Heavy makeup highlighted her prominent cheek bones and almond brown eyes.
“Please. The table.” She pointed to the fold up tray table.
He fumbled with the latch and lowered the table. The book dropped on the floor. He leaned over to try and grab it.
She bent down to pick it up at the same time. He smelled her perfume, exotic and heady, but not overpowering. A wisp of her hair had escaped her tight, elegant bun, and brushed his face as she stood up.
She placed the book on the tray table next to the food.
“Thank you.” he said, blushing redder with every accelerating heartbeat.
            “You’re welcome.”
            “Would you like a drink?”
            “Just water thanks.”
She handed him a small plastic bottle.
            “Thank you. Xie xie.” he said, trying out his night class Chinese.
The passenger in the seat next to him said something in Chinese. She leaned over him slightly as she passed the man a tray. Her perfume wafted over him again. He stared open mouthed, watching every graceful, practised movement. She turned to the other side of the aisle. He continued to gaze at her, oblivious to the babble of the airplane cabin, her apron was tied neatly in a bow behind her, and the tight fitting skirt and blouse subtly accentuated her slender curves.
            Then she flicked the foot brake on the trolley with her shoe and it rolled down the aisle behind him. He craned his neck to see but the second flight attendant obscured the view.
            He turned back to his tray and unwrapped his food. When he had unveiled the collection of rice, meat and vegetables, and miniature side dishes he twisted around again to glance down the aisle. She served the other passengers with the same professional, friendly, yet distant smile.
The trolley moved again, further back.
He began to eat. He remembered the time a pretty young woman sat beside him on the bus home from university. She had blonde hair down to her shoulders, wore a tight black top, covered by a more demure small cardigan which both concealed and showed off her figure, and black and white pants. For some reason he noticed her nose. It was perfectly proportioned in profile and face on. She had beautiful smile too. She had played with her phone and when he glanced at it she seemed to be typing in a foreign language. He asked her what language it was.
            “Greek.” she had said.
            “Are you studying it?”
            “No. Just looking up a few phrases. The alphabet is different. I don’t know how to say some of the letters.”
            At that point his tongue got tied in knots and he spent the rest of the trip looking out the window wishing he could think of something to say. Was she planning to travel? Good conversations starter. Did she have a Greek boyfriend? Bummer. A Greek colleague at work perhaps? That would be ok… She didn’t look like a student.
He never did decide quite what to say.
            When she got off she said “Have a good evening.” and smiled at him.
He replied “You too.” and thought she was the most beautiful woman he had ever met.
            Until now.
He looked down the aisle again. He saw her down the back talking to another passenger. He wracked his brain for something to talk about.
            Twenty minutes later she came back with the drinks cart. He made eye contact and smiled at her.
“Hello. Coffee please.”
She poured it from the jug.
“Can I have extra milk please?”
She handed another small container to him and began pouring tea for the next passenger.
Xie Xie. Your English is very good.”
She hesitated and looked at him. “Oh no, not very good.”
She passed a cup tea across to the passenger beside him.
Malcolm persisted. “Where did you learn it?”
“I learn at school and now I study myself. I very like abroad.” She gave a him brief smile and turned away to serve the passengers on the other side of the aisle.
She returned later with the trolley pick up the cups and other rubbish. He said hello again.  This time he looked carefully at her name tag but couldn’t read the Chinese characters. “What is your name?”
            She looked at him. “Yao Jiali”
            “I’m Malcolm. It’s nice to meet you.”
 She gave him the same polite smile and moved on down the aisle.
He remembered something else about the young woman on the bus. Despite the fact that he regularly rode the same bus at about the same time for the next year, he never saw her again.
When he finished the coffee he stood up went to the toilet. He brushed his fingers through his hair and straightened his clothes. He looked at his face in the mirror and shrugged. Can’t do much about that, except follow his Grandmother’s advice – ‘Every face looks better with a smile’. Then he made his way back to the galley. He looked for Yao Jiali and smiled when he saw her. “Hi. Could I have some more coffee please?”
            She nodded and turned to the bench where the half coffee pots stood.
He looked around the galley at the other flight attendants, then turned back to her. “Do you live in Taiyuan or back in Shanghai?”
            “Taiyuan.”
“Is this your last flight today?” Arrival was scheduled for just after 9.30pm.
“Yes. We go home. Tomorrow start early again.”
“Oh. It sounds very busy.” 
“Yes.”
“I’m coming to Taiyuan to teach English at the university.”
            “Oh. Teacher is a good job. Milk?”
“Yes please.”
            She gave him two.
“Thank you, you remembered.” He smiled broadly.
She nodded and began to rearrange items in the galley.
“Thank you for your help. It was nice to talk to you. See you later.”
“You’re welcome.” she said looking up and offering the same professional smile, before turning back to her work.
Malcolm went back to his seat.
He stood up and scrabbled in his bag in the overhead locker, sat down and wrote his name and email address on a piece of paper.
The fasten seat belt sign came on and the plane began to descend.
            When the plane landed he lagged behind the other passengers and looked for her up and down the aisle but did not see her.
At the baggage claim carousel he glanced around at the other passengers and wondered if the crew’s bags would come through as well. Probably not.
He collected his luggage and walked out into the arrivals hall. He looked up. The airport was decorated with dozens of red lanterns hung from frames suspended from the high ceiling. It was the lantern festival, two weeks after the Chinese New Year. Malcolm paused in the middle of the hall wondering if the university transport was going to meet him after all. He couldn’t see a sign with his name on it, and everyone else seemed to know where they were going. A steady stream of passengers went out the doors and into strange yellow glow of the sodium lights outside.
A column of flight attendants filed out from a staff doorway into main hall. They wore matching dark blue overcoats against the winter chill and walked towards the airport doors, wheeling small suitcases behind them.
            He saw Yao Jiali. His throat tightened. He took a deep breath and walked quickly over to the flight attendants. “Miss Yao.”
She looked at him. Her colleagues giggled and she blushed under her makeup.
“I was wondering if you would like to practise your English with me. I will be taking Chinese classes at the university when I’m not teaching. We can help each other.”
            She looked at him without reacting. Her colleagues whispered to each other. She glanced at them and bit her lip.
He pulled the piece of paper from his coat pocket. “Here is my name and email address. If you want to you can contact me.”
            She hesitated a moment then took the piece of paper and put it in her pocket. “I will think about it.”
“Ok. Bye” He smiled and gave her a brief wave.
“Goodbye.” she said and hurried through the doors to the company shuttle bus waiting just outside.
He heard her colleagues laughing and making comments to each other. “Hen shuai.” Cute.
            He went back to his bags and began to trundle them out of the doors looking for taxi or a bus to the city. A young Chinese woman came up to him. “Malcolm Rees?”
“Yes.”
“I am from university. We have car for you. This way.”
“Ok. Thank you.”
            He looked at the airline bus as it pulled away from the kerb. Several faces stared back at him. He scanned them but could not see Yao Jiali.
“This way.” repeated the university rep.
            Malcom nodded, watched the back of the bus recede for few moments, exhaled slowly, and then followed her.
 
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Two weeks later he received an email.
 
 
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The quote I paraphrased at the beginning of this story is from the book:
Chinese Lessons, by John Pomfret. 2006
If you are lucky your local library may have copy. I thoroughly recommend it.
 
 
Love at First Flight (Part 2) – Life is a Roller Coaster, here

 

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