Wednesday 18 June 2014

Beijing Private Eyes - Part 8 Fight or Flight (Finale)


The sun was up already and the light played on his closed eyelids as Mark slowly drifted into consciousness. He felt wonderfully warm and comfortable. He lay on his left side, his chest against Evie’s back and their legs intertwined. His arm was draped over her hip.


“Mark,” she whispered “are you awake?”


“Uhh.” he mumbled sleepily.


“Umm. I just wanted to say that I couldn’t think of anyone I’d rather be locked up and held hostage with.”


“Thanks” he replied, “me neither.”
 

 
 
Airport in fog, Taiyuan, China  (Photo: M Griffiths)


Beijing Private Eyes -  A foreign teacher in Beijing meets an unexpected and attractive visitor in need of assistance. He offers to help and things begin to get complicated.


Read Beijing Private Eyes - Part 1  Arrival  here, Part 2  Lights, camera...  here, Part 3 - Room service here, Part 4 - Ancient History here, Part 5 - Party time here, Part 6 - On the Road here, Part 7 - Cold storage here,


(For my six peak oil short story competition entries set in Australia and China see here)




Part 8 – Fight or Flight

 by Matthew Griffiths


(Rated M)

The sun was up already and the light played on his closed eyelids as Mark slowly drifted into consciousness. He felt wonderfully warm and comfortable. He lay on his left side, his chest against Evie’s back and their legs intertwined. His arm was draped over her hip.

“Mark,” she whispered “are you awake?”

“Uhh.” he mumbled sleepily.

“Umm. I just wanted to say that I couldn’t think of anyone I’d rather be locked up and held hostage with.”

“Thanks” he replied, “me neither.”

            They lay together quietly without moving. Eventually Evie broke the silence. “What’s this?” She reached down between their bodies and ran her hand over the hard lump in his underpants. He hadn’t even realised he had an erection.

He coughed with embarrassment “That’s an involuntary physiological reaction.” He pulled her hand away. “Ignore it and it will go away.”

She put his hand on her stomach. “Maybe I don’t want it to.” she whispered. She lifted her hips and slipped her knickers down to her thighs. Then she slid her hand inside his underwear and enclosed his shaft.

“Oooh,” he whispered, “that’s not helping.”

Outside a car door slammed and muffled voices reached them.

A bolt of adrenaline shot through him. “Shit, they’re back.” Mark whispered.

Evie tensed, clasping his hand to her. They slowly disconnected. He kissed her neck briefly and swung off the bed. He adjusted his underwear over his rapidly shrinking bulge, pulled down his t-shirt and then sat down on the mat. He ran his hands through his hair.

“Get ready,” he said, “this could be it.”

She pulled up her knickers, rolled over on the bed and sat up, wrapping the blanket around her again.

            Two sets of footsteps arrived at the door. “Stand back.” a voice shouted in Chinese. There was banging of metal as the padlock was removed and the door opened. One of the men walked in while the other stood in the doorway with the heavy padlock in his hand. He threw Evie’s clothes in a pile on the bed. He pointed to the far end of the room. “Sit over there.” he said in Chinese looking at Mark.

Mark looked up and slowly moved to the far end of the room and squatted. Evie began to pull on her clothes. The man stood in the middle of the room between the bed and the mat on the floor. Mark eyed up the distance between him and the door and between Evie and the guy.  Evie had her pants and jacket on and was pulling on her socks.

“On trois.” he said. She looked at him, her eyebrows raised. He put his hand down steadying himself with three fingers. “Un, deux, trois.” He mumbled under his breath.

She nodded slightly.

       Un.” She put on the first shoe.

Deux.” She pulled on the second shoe.

Trois.” She lashed out kicking the man in the stomach and pushing him back toward the wall. Mark sprang up and sprinted for the door. The second man raised the padlock in his hand. Mark leapt at him feet first connecting with his chest as he tried to swing his arm. Evie moved to the door behind Mark and he leapt to his feet.

“Run!” he yelled and he raced down the corridor The door at the end was half open.

Behind him he heard the first man yell “Zhou!” the door at the end opened fully and the leader, Zhou, looked in. He was the heavy Mark has seen outside Zhang’s office. Mark hesitated briefly and then ran at him. He run up the stairs and tried to tackle him out of the way. Zhou twisted to one side and landed a kick in his stomach. Mark staggered and fell to his knees. Evie ran up the stairs behind him and tried to help him up. Zhou grabbed her and threw her down, twisting her arm behind her.

“Ahhh.” she cried between clenched teeth.

The two other men appeared from inside and jumped on Mark pinning his arms and legs to the ground.

            “Take him back inside.” ordered Zhou. Mark rose to his hands and knees a few feet from the car. Evie looked over at him trying to stand. The two men pulled him up and began to drag him into the store house building

“See you in L.A. Take care.” he whispered as he passed her.

Evie nodded blankly and watched as they dragged him along the corridor. She tried to wriggle out the man’s grip and grimaced with pain as her held her arm up her back.

The men took him past a plastic bag lying on the floor which contained his clothes, and threw him back into the room. One of them tossed two more bottles of water in behind him and slammed the door. He heard them secure the padlock.

“Zai jian.” one of them said, laughing. Their footsteps receded up the corridor and the door at the end door slammed shut.

Evie glanced at the car and the buildings beyond, looking for an escape route. One of the men grabbed her and pushed her into the back seat of the SUV. Zhou hopped in the front and the other man went to the driver’s door. She recognised the scent of the chemical instantly. The sickly sweet smell. She felt an urge to retch. The car doors shut and then the cloth came up onto her face. She tensed and struggled against the man’s arms then slowly slumped to her left. Her shoulder leaned against the door and her forehead turned and rested on the window. After twenty seconds the man pulled the cloth away and pushed the button to lock the door. Evie remained slumped in the seat, motionless.

 

The car started moving.

Not this time you bastards. Evie sat in the car, her mind whirring.  Right, focus. There’s got to be some way to find this place again.

The car stopped and idled. She opened her left eye slowly, looking to see if any of the men could see her. The car has stopped at a small gate opening onto a narrow lane. Behind the car the driver was putting a chain and padlock back on the gate. She tried to look up without moving her head. An old weather beaten sign was mounted high on the brick wall. Please let there be some English. She scanned the sign. It was covered by several dozen flaking Chinse characters. There were also some English letters but they spelled Chinese words. She could see Beijing had no idea what the other words meant. Jiaohua Chang she repeated the words in her mind. Jee, ay-oh? hoo ah chang? God I hope Mei can understand this. Jee ay oh hoo ah chang.  Jee ay oh hoo ah chang. She closed her eye and the car moved off.

            About half an hour later they pulled into a warehouse. Another car arrived beside the SUV. The leader got out and talked with someone outside the car. Then she was picked up and carried to the car and thrown in the back seat. Her bag was thrown in beside her. She shook her head and held it, pretending to be dazed. A woman sat beside her in the back seat and helped her sit up. The car started and drove out and onto the road.

            She rubbed her eyes, sneaking a glimpse at the driver. It was Zhang.

“Are you fine?” he asked.

“I’m ok thanks.” she replied hesitantly. She took a breath. “Thank you so much for rescuing me.” She broke into tears.

Miss Zhao leaned over and handed her a tissue.

“Thanks” she said quietly noting the look of smugness on Zhao’s face.

After a minute she calmed down. “What will happen to my assistant?” she asked Zhang.

“I don’t know. The men did not say. First we make you safe then we can talk to the police about him.”

“Ok. The police. That’s good.” She continued to sniff into a tissue. “Can you please take me back to my accommodation. I want to get my bags and go back to L.A. straight away.”

“No. Your apartment is not safe, they may go there to find you again. You will stay at my house. They will not be able to get you there.”

            She picked up her hand bag from the floor of the car. “I’ve got to phone my Mum. She will be going crazy wondering where I am.” She pulled out the phone. The battery had been removed. She put it back in and replaced the back panel. She turned it on and tapped the screen waiting for the signal to appear. She had a dozen missed calls, half from her Mum and half from Mei. She pressed the call button. “Hi Mum.” she said and then launched into rapid French. Miss Zhao both looked at her surprised.

“My mum is French.” She whispered out of the side of her mouth, covering the phone.

            Next she sent a text to the producer and her agent. No need to alarm them yet she thought. They can’t do anything from over there anyway.

            Zhang seemed happy to let her play with her phone so she looked up her twitter page. She could see Miss Zhao looking over at her phone.

“Twitter.” She said smiling at her. Miss Zhao shrugged her shoulders and leaned back in the seat.

            Evie’s twitter feed had been deluged with queries. “Where are you Evie? Are you ok? Why no messages? What are you doing?”

Thanks for asking guys, but blimey, don’t you people have anything better to do? She typed a message.

 

Evie Thomasson @Evie_T

Beijing sightseeing. Got lost for a while like #Private_Eyes.

Going to see producer’s house now.

 

After she posted the tweet she copied the text and swiftly sent it to Mei, conscious that Miss Zhao was watching her. Mei, please, please, understand this jibberish.

“Ok,” she said loudly “that should keep the fans happy for a little while. I usually do four or five a day.” She kept her phone in her hand.

 The car slowed outside a security gate. A large billboard beside the entrance said ‘Welcome to Fortune Paradise - Lifestyle and prosperity.’ Her phone rang. She answered brightly. “Hi Mei, how are you?”

“I’m fine. Are you ok? I called you and Mark five times and checked the apartment. Can you talk?”

“It’s been a, ummm, busy couple of days. I’m with the producer now. Going to his house.”

“Where is Mark?”

“I don’t know.”

“Is he ok?”

“No.”

“Do you know where he is taking you?”

“It looks like nice part of the city. It’s called ‘Fortune Paradise’. What a lovely estate. I think I’d like to live here. We’re just going through a big security gate now.”

Zhang waved to the security guard at the gate who lifted the barrier and waved them through.

“Can you get out?”

“Probably not. I don’t know yet.”

“Ok.” said Mei. “I will try to find a way to get into the compound and pick you up. I will text later.”

“Ok. Hopefully I’ll see you before I leave Beijing. I’d love to go shopping again. Thanks for the call. Bye.”

She closed the phone, placed it in her jacket pocket and zipped it up. The car slowly cruised down a cobbled road lined with French chateau-style villas.  “Wow, this looks impressive.” she said as they pulled up in front of a house.

“Thank you. I have been lucky.” Said Zhang.

She took in the balconies, gables, and elaborately tiled roofs and the high wrought iron fence around the garden. Zhang gave her tour of the house. Zhang’s wealth was evident in the furnishings and decoration of the rooms. “It’s beautiful.” said Evie.

“Movie business is good these days. Very popular. He opened a door to a large darkened room, “This is the media room,” then he turned and waved, “and this is my office.” It held a large wooden desk, shelves with books and photos and a large Chinese style landscape painting.

Evie moved to the painting and then to the large window behind the desk. “This is too beautiful to work in Mr Zhang.” she said, then turned and took in the desk and shelves. Her eyes lingered on a photo. She shivered.

“Are you cold?”

“I think I got a chill in that room.” She wrapped her arms around herself.

“You must be hungry too. Have some lunch and then you can have shower and change clothes. Miss Zhao has bought you some things. Please make yourself comfortable. I must work today but tonight we will have a fine dinner, ok?”

“What about the police. Have you phoned them? They must find my assistant.”

He nodded, “I will call them now.” He made a call and spoke rapid Chinese for a time and then listened. “He ended the call and turned to Evie. “They can’t do anything unless we have more details. We should wait for another phone call. The police will phone if they have any reports.”

He departed and after some food Miss Zhao finally led her to a guest room. She looked around the room. It contained a large bed and dresser on two sides and a door that opened into an ensuite on the third. The fourth wall had large French doors which opened onto a balcony. Miss Zhao followed her out onto the balcony. “This is a lovely house.” she said smiling at Miss Zhao. Zhao smiled back. She went to the balcony and quietly stood at the railing staring into the garden. She was on the upper floor. She measured the distance to the ground below. Not too high to jump if she landed on the grass. Then around to the front and over the fence. It was high but looked climbable. Zhang’s office looked out the front. She would have to be careful.

“I think I’ll have a shower now. Thank you for all your help.”

She locked the door quietly after Miss Zhao departed then retreated into the bathroom. She locked the bathroom door too and pulled out her phone.

“Evie?”

“Yes. Mei, I’m at Zhang’s house. He seems to want me to stay. He says it’s not safe for me to go back to the apartment. Mark is locked up in a store room somewhere. We were kidnapped. They let me out but he’s still there.” Her voice caught in her throat.

“Can you get out?”

“His assistant is still here and Zhang will be back for dinner. Maybe later tonight. I think I can get out to the street.”

“Ok that is good. I am trying to find the address and get someone to let us in. I text later.”

    

Zhang retuned in the early evening with no news of Mark. Soon after food appeared from a kitchen in the rear of the house. At dinner Zhang made conversation but Evie could not bring herself to enjoy it. She asked him about Mark again, “Do you think he will be all right?”

     He smiled. “I am sure he will be fine. Do not worry. You are safe now.”

She began to cry. “It’s all my fault. He was just my assistant. He didn’t do anything.” She sobbed into a tissue. “I am very sorry Mr Zhang. I’m very tired. I didn’t sleep very much in that horrible room. I really need an early night and a long sleep in. Hopefully I will be better company tomorrow; especially if we get some news of my assistant.”

     Zhang rose frowning “Well then, ahh, sleep well.” He motioned to Miss Zhao to accompany her.

When they arrived at her door Evie managed a small smile of thanks and then locked the bedroom door. She pulled off the skirt and blouse Zhao had bought and pulled on her pants, shirt and jacket and then sent a text to Mei:

Ready when u r

     Mei replied quickly.

We have a way in.

Meet you outside at 11pm.

She texted back.

Ok

 

 

After the car had travelled well out of sight of the gate Mei’s friend reached back from the passenger seat and pulled off the blanket. “I think it ok now.”

Evie sat up. The man lit up a cigarette.

Evie leaned forward, “Can I have one of those.”

He passed one over and lit it for her.

“I didn’t know you smoked.” said Mei.

“Only when I’m really drunk or really stressed.” she said inhaling deeply. Her hands still trembled and she hugged one arm to her body as the car sped onto the fifth ring road and away from Zhang’s house. Her fingers played with the rip in her jacket from the fence, the crunch of the gravel path under Zhang’s office window still echoed loudly in her ears.

     When she finished the cigarette Mei asked: “Do you know where Mark is?”

She tried to concentrate on what she had seen. “It was an old factory. Mark thinks it’s south of the airport. Big brick buildings. I saw a sign. Maybe it’s the name of the factory.”

“What was it?” Mei asked.

Evie closed her eyes and focussed. “Beijing Jee ay oh hoo ah chang” She opened her eyes and looked at Mei’s face in the rear vision mirror. She looked puzzled. Evie’s face dropped. Oh God. Did I get it wrong?

They stopped for some traffic lights and Mei pulled a notebook out of her hand bag. “Can you write it? Even something close will help.”

Evie took the notebook and pen. “Jee” JI  “ay”  A  “oh” O   “hoo”  HU  “ah”  A  “chang”  CHANG.   JIAO  HUA  CHANG. She passed it over the Mei.

She glanced at it as she drove. “Yes! Perfect. Beijing Jiaohua Chang. That’s a big old factory. Closed now. Ok we will find him. My friend Liu here and some other people will help us in the morning. We can start early, hopefully before Zhang knows you are gone.”

     Evie wound the straps of her bag around her wrists and held it close. “Mark made me promise to get on the first plane to L.A. He said it would be safer for me. He thinks Zhang might have organised it.” She hugged herself tighter. “And I think he may be right.”

Mei nodded and stared at the road.

 

 

 

It was light when they finally found the gate. Liu lifted a heavy set of bolt cutters from the boot of the car and cut the chain. When they got inside he prepared to do the same to the lock on the door.

Shei ah?” yelled a voice in Chinese. Who is it?

“Mark! It’s us.” Evie shouted back.

The lock snapped and Evie pushed open the door. Mark stood in the centre of the room, the wire handle from the bucket in his hand. His arm was covered in dust from the mortar of a partially exposed brick next to the window. “Prison Break without the tattoos.” said Mark sheepishly.

“More like the Shawshank Redemption.” said Evie. “You realise it took him twenty years?”

“I had two steamed buns and the thought of salmon tartare to keep me going.”

Evie rushed forward and wrapped her arms around him. He dropped the wire and held her tight to his chest.

“You’re supposed to be at the airport.” he said softly.

She pressed her head into his shoulder. “I had to pick up something important on the way.”
 
 
 
THE  END      
 

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Read Beijing Private Eyes - Part 1  Arrival  here, Part 2  Lights, camera...  here, Part 3 - Room service here, Part 4 - Ancient history here, Part 5 - Party time here, Part 6 - On the Road here, Part 7 - Cold Storage here.

 
A new story will be posted next Wednesday:  "Tell him he's dreaming" - An engineer has an environmental epiphany but things don't go quite according to plan.


For my six peak oil / post-industrial short story competition entries set in Australia and China see below:  

Each story stands alone but some are linked. Suggested order of reading:

Stories set in China:


Winds of Change –  In 2022 a migrant worker struggles to realise his dreams and fulfil his family obligations.


Outside In – It's 2050, the country and economy have changed. A recycler studies for an exam to improve his prospects, and an indentured servant plans her escape.


Seeds of Time – (Sequel to Outside In). In 2055 rural China prospers again after a period of dramatic changes, then things are complicated by a strange visitor and a hidden object.


Stories set in Australia: A North Queensland Trilogy


Robots on Mars – 2025. A space-mad city boy adjusts to life in the country and tries to solve a mystery.    (Note: no actual robots or Martians involved)


Promised Land – (Sequel to Robots on Mars). It’s 2050 and development threatens the rural district. Is it what they really need and if not, how can they stop it?
 
Heart of Glass - (Sequel to Promised Land). The year is 2099, high school graduates prepare to step into adulthood and the community prepares to celebrate the turn of a new century.

 

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